this is nice...
ok lets start with this is really calming and i enjoyed it. the second guitar sounded like shit, unfortunately, but the third guitar sounded great. other than that, something sounds out of tune at 0:16, and you had a few timing issues on certain parts, where counts were either rushed or just completely skipped, and the last five little chord things at the end (0:54) were 1. a terrible ending in my opinion and 2. they werent in time with the rest of the song, they were too fast. instead of those chords, maybe just one drawn out strummed chord, but thats just my opinion, its your song, and you can do what you please. fix the timing issues and that second earpiercing guitar and you have yourself a winner. (note, i only give 5's when i like something and this won me over with the beginning, so 5'd)