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hum.

so after reviewing the first one, i realized that you had redone it, so i'll review this and the next one. shorter though, so just thing of it as an edit of the last review. everything was better except your timing was still off, and the ending was again in my opinion shit (sorry). still really pretty though.

this is nice...

ok lets start with this is really calming and i enjoyed it. the second guitar sounded like shit, unfortunately, but the third guitar sounded great. other than that, something sounds out of tune at 0:16, and you had a few timing issues on certain parts, where counts were either rushed or just completely skipped, and the last five little chord things at the end (0:54) were 1. a terrible ending in my opinion and 2. they werent in time with the rest of the song, they were too fast. instead of those chords, maybe just one drawn out strummed chord, but thats just my opinion, its your song, and you can do what you please. fix the timing issues and that second earpiercing guitar and you have yourself a winner. (note, i only give 5's when i like something and this won me over with the beginning, so 5'd)

...well

i much prefer your dance music...just make more of that....LOTS MORE!!!

wow.

may i just say that this is a great fucking song. i just kind of ran into it accindentally, but im glad i did. this is amazing, and thank you for giving newgrounds something better than most peoples shitty music....5/5 and 10/10!

wow...

um...how your gonna top this i dont know...this is an epic adventure through the deep of the ocean(SPACE!) lolz....but its amazing...so yeah...5/5 and 10/10

Joobles responds:

I love you, you sexy bitch.

thank you

this version is 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,0 00.6 times better

Joobles responds:

Yes, you are correct. Again.

review summary.

the old version was better honestly...the bell synth needs to be back in the beginning, otherwise the beginning is boring and repetitive, the synth part at 1:54 thats replacing the bass is just wrong, its something involving the notes, but that part isnt good, so you should take it out, or something because it destroys the rest of the song, because your just like "wow, that was a pretty good song until that" i give you a 9/10 because i know the songs potential because i heard the original version...please consult me on this later, we'll fix all the problems and resubmit it...

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